Thursday, September 4, 2008

Press Release 1: Announcment

NEWS RELEASE
ABC Real Estate LLC
123 Creative Way
Logan, Ut 84341
Contact: President Preston Parker
801-555-4567 Office
FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
Sept. 4, 2008


NEW REAL ESTATE COMPANY ESTABLISHED IN LOGAN
ABC Real Estate Creates Third Start-up Company

ABC Real Estate LLC has just opened in Logan, UT with a new system and new real estate plans targeted to create opportunity for Cache Valley.
“I see a bright future for Logan residents and we are here to create an effective and efficiant opportunity " President Preseton Parker said.
ABC Real Estate is third start-up company. With a new real estate system and real estate, ABC Real Estate is looking for investors to use the new system.
Equity-helping, land trust, and benificiary-directed systems have been created in new ways that sets ABC Real Estate

3 comments:

DannonL said...

Good job. I really like the direction this press release is heading. The spelling could be a little more efficient, but other than that it is very well written.

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Emily Metts said...

Great job! I thought you explained the company very well and made it interesting to read.

Sarah said...

Ryan,
I think you should add a space between the company address and your FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE line. Also don't forget to add a boiler plate into your final copy. Great job on this considering the time limit! :)