Lee’s Market Place
555 East 1400 North
Logan, UT 84341
Dear Jared McDonald:
The Utah State University Sexual Assault and Anti-Violent Information (SAAVI), invites you to donate one thousand dollars and fifty hours of service to help victims in need and assist with events.
The Utah State University Sexual Assault and Ant-Violent Information (SAAVI), asks for a donation of $1000 and 50 hours of service to help victims in need and assist with events.
Your donation will help students in need and bring recognition to Lee’s Market Place. The purpose of the USU SAAVI Office is to help create violence-free environments and healthy relationships at USU, and with your help we can better meet these goals.
We come to you for support because many of the students at USU and victims shop at Lee’s and have a trust in your services. Your donation will build relationships with the community as well as maintain them.
SAAVI has smaller sponsors but seeks a larger sponsor with higher credibility like that of Lee’s Market Place. We fill your, "You've Got a Friend at Lee's" slogan meets the standard for our mission statement.
One of Lee’s goals from the mission statement is “to make Lee's Market Place a place where the customer feels at home.” By donating to SAAVI we feel you will be meeting up to your mission statement accomplish
7 comments:
Your letter is looking great! It is very straight forward. I know exactly what you are asking. Good Job!
I like how you guys made it hard for Lee's to say no! Good job
You have a solid letter. My only suggestion is you put the sponsor appeal a little higher. Remember they could stop reading your letter after the second paragraph.
The only thing I caught was a mistake in the 1st two paragraphs. You did not use numerals in the 1st paragraph and you used numerals in the 2nd! Other than that great job!!!!!!!
This is great!
Good job! This is very clear and easy to understand what you are asking for. Great!
This is great. It looks like a real letter not just an outline. Might want to add to the executive summary.
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